Roz edited a piece for me last year and the things she crossed out made it better.

I’m working on book this year and will seek her editorial expertise to help it get tighter and funnier, not so freaking poetical, and a lot more suspenseful than thinking about porn that won’t hurry up and happen—
or robot wars,
or an amygdala hijacking by an old friend that’s been pimping me to collect her narcissistic supply.

How about the making of a homeschooled Ph. D.?
Should be good.